Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 2, 2021
Magic Middle east country
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Lucy!! :)
ReplyDeleteI love your site I didn't now Iran had so many people in it.
The only feed back I have for you is make sure you use full stops and capital letters. :)
Bye Lucy!!!
Thanks Stella! I will make sure I use my full stops and capital letter. Thanks for letting me know.
DeleteHi Lucy
ReplyDeleteI really liked your site, it was very Interesting nice to read. Maybe next time you could add some more info like why woman wear scarves on there heads and why they dress so differently than us. this reminded me on something we do in toroa. Good Job!
-Olivia F